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Pure to place

by zephyr

Descriptionto drift...

Posted: 21.02.12  |  Last edited: 21.02.12

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Ohh my jayed eyes long to sleep,

In a world so peaceful and deep,

Let the weight of my being blow gently along with the falling leaves of grace,

Everything feels perfect now and is pure to place...

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Jeanna Godfrey

Tuesday, 21st February 2012 | 01:26 am

Member | Points: 498

Hi Zephyr

Sounds like the perfect moment to drift off to the land of Nod and rest those jayed eyes. Succinct, but says it all.

Regards Jeanna

Twydell

Tuesday, 21st February 2012 | 01:45 am

Member | Points: 2067

Hi Zephyr !!

 

Very well described !! you have me yawning !!! 

 

Enjoyed the read thank you,

 

Regards,

Steve.

zephyr

Tuesday, 21st February 2012 | 01:56 am

Member | Points: 810

thanks for the comments...

Kerkedijk

Thursday, 23rd February 2012 | 10:17 pm

Member | Points: 5030

Zephyr,

Lovely poem, pure to place is a great title. Peacefulthumbs up x

susanna Dunne

Thursday, 23rd February 2012 | 10:24 pm

Member | Points: 6482

Most relaxing Z

Love this piece

Well Done ;-D

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