I write entirely to find out what I'm thinking, what I'm looking at, what I see and what it means. What I want and what I fear.
No Encore this evening.
DescriptionI get lost sometimes. When I find my way out I find poems like these on the page before me ...................
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I’m trapped, imprisoned in an auditorium,
Alone on a stage of stagnant dreams,
With a mist of vapored happiness,
Laying desolate beneath my feet,
Creeping in every direction,
Yet never leaving, never parting.
Each line I cast out with vigour,
Only to be swallowed by gluttonous echoes,
Of silent patrons basking in self-absorption,
And drowning in their sea of shadows,
Light streams from vacant balconies,
Only to be quenched by curtains closed.
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Thursday, 23rd February 2012 | 02:57 am
Thursday, 23rd February 2012 | 08:04 pm
Steve,
Love the images in this, really dream like, enchanting. Imprisoned, stagnant dreams, mist of vapoured happiness, swallowed echoes, sea of shadows, vacant balconies, quenched by curtains closed.....all wonderful lines giving a great depth to this poem and mystical/spiritual feel throughout. Well thought out and very enjoyable to contemplate a while.
Maire x
Thursday, 23rd February 2012 | 11:48 pm
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