No Encore this evening.

DescriptionI get lost sometimes. When I find my way out I find poems like these on the page before me ...................

Posted: 23.02.12  |  Last edited: 23.02.12

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I’m trapped, imprisoned in an auditorium,

Alone on a stage of stagnant dreams,

With a mist of vapored happiness,

Laying desolate beneath my feet,

Creeping in every direction,

Yet never leaving, never parting.

 

Each line I cast out with vigour,

Only to be swallowed by gluttonous echoes,

Of silent patrons basking in self-absorption,

And drowning in their sea of shadows,

Light streams from vacant balconies,

Only to be quenched by curtains closed.

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Hi Steve

Liked this piece Loads! ;-D

Sometimes I just like to close those curtains so to speak

Steve,

Love the images in this, really dream like, enchanting. Imprisoned, stagnant dreams, mist of vapoured happiness, swallowed echoes, sea of shadows, vacant balconies, quenched by curtains closed.....all wonderful lines giving a great depth to this poem and mystical/spiritual feel throughout. Well thought out and very enjoyable to contemplate a while. thumbs up Maire x

Hi Steve

Sounds like your worst nightmare with your feet rooted to the spot!

Very good explosion of thoughts.

Jeanna

Hi Susanna !!

 

Yep I sometimes get smothered by my own thoughts and I find it hard to step back into reality.

I think thats what I was trying to say anyway ?? Like I said I get lost sometimes !!

 

Thanks for reading, and for leaving your very kind comment.....

 

Regards,

Steve.

Hi Maire !!

 

Mmmmm I don't know about dream like ?? Maybe a little spiritual yes.....

As I said in the description sometimes I don't remember writing this stuff down I get so caught up in my own thoughts......

 

I appreciate your reading and leaving such a kind comment,

I'm so glad you enjoyed the read ...

 

Kind regards,

Steve.

Hi Jeanna !!

 

LOL

I find it so interesting the different views readers and fellow writers have on these random writes I sometimes post .......

Thats what I love so much about poetry ;-D

 

Thanks for reading and commenting, much appreciated...

 

Kind regards,

Steve.

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