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Newport Heals

by Jeanna Godfrey

DescriptionNewport, Pembrokeshire, is one of those places that everyone loves, and keep going back to again and again.

Posted: 22.02.12  |  Last edited: 22.02.12

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Newport heals

And mends

Hearts and minds

And still people

Come and go

To taste the lure

And fascination

Of it all

 

White horses

Ride the ever

Returning waves

They rise and fall

Mirroring our

Very lungs

 

The blueness

Greeness

Fluffy whiteness

Remain a picture

 

My heart is

Still there

Like so many

 

How much room

Is there for

All these hearts?

New and Old

To come and go

For ever

And a day.

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susanna Dunne

Wednesday, 22nd February 2012 | 09:56 pm

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Very nice Jeanna

Well done ;-D

Jeanna Godfrey

Wednesday, 22nd February 2012 | 10:03 pm

Member | Points: 498

Thanks Susanna - glad you liked it.

Regards Jeanna

Twydell

Wednesday, 22nd February 2012 | 10:22 pm

Member | Points: 2067

Hi Jeanna !!

 

This is lovely, Loved the use of color.

It sounds like a magical place, especially the way you describe it ;-)

 

Much enjoyed the read, Thank you.

 

Kind regards,

Steve.

Jeanna Godfrey

Wednesday, 22nd February 2012 | 10:30 pm

Member | Points: 498

Hi Steve

Thanks for your comments. It is magical. I like it when there is nothing in my head, except cotton wool - which happens when I am there - then I can notice everything around me when time stands still.

Regards Jeanna

Kerkedijk

Thursday, 23rd February 2012 | 08:06 pm

Member | Points: 5030

Jeanna,

Beautiful imagery and use of colour. I felt I was there looking at the sea, my lungs filled with wellness and joy. Wonderful when poetry transports us to places like this, I felt I was there, beautiful to read, thank you. thumbs up Maire x

Jeanna Godfrey

Thursday, 23rd February 2012 | 11:23 pm

Member | Points: 498

Hi Maire

Thanks very much. I think being relaxed helps you notice things around you.

Jeanna

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