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How id love to be a rose tall and beautiful amongst the rest of nature the peacefull silence. Nature is the best remedy for any human being. The tall beautiful flower each second gets closer to losing the few remaing beautiful petals.
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Thursday, 26th August 2010 | 12:11 pm
Friday, 10th December 2010 | 12:03 am
Smiles,
You must write some more. This was lovely
It might be nice if you laid it out like:
How id love to be a rose
tall and beautiful
amongst the rest
of nature the peaceful silence.
Nature is the best remedy
for any human being.
The tall beautiful flower
each second gets closer
to losing the few remaining beautiful petals.
Look forward to seeing more work from you.
Wednesday, 5th January 2011 | 10:34 pm
Saturday, 7th April 2012 | 07:01 am
Hi Smiles.
I have to say i really like this.
This is what i got from it- you want to be a beautiful rose, and even though you know death is around the corner, you are happy to be one with nature for just a short time, happy in yourself and your surroundings.
Maybe i'll looking to much into it, but thats what i got and i love the deepness of it.
And i completly agree, nature is the best remedy for humans.
p.s. if this is your first poem, i cant wait to read more.
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