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My Perfect Gem

by Twydell

DescriptionInspired by my Beautiful wife !!!

Posted: 20.02.12  |  Last edited: 20.02.12

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Your eyes,
Greenest emeralds,
Jade crystal water over coral

Your hair,
Black as onyx,
Smoothest hand made silk

Your skin,
Pink as pearl
The softest velvet 

Your lips,
Cerise topaz,
Silky petals of a rose

Four precious gem stones,
Four features of a gem,
A collection that I cherish,
An Anthology that I love.

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Jeanna Godfrey

Tuesday, 21st February 2012 | 01:37 am

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Hi Steve

What a lovely token of appreciation.

Jeanna

Twydell

Tuesday, 21st February 2012 | 01:41 am

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Thanks Jeanna !!

 

She's worth every line wink

 

Steve.

Stephen Moore

Tuesday, 21st February 2012 | 02:19 am

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Nice one Steve, love is in the air, beautiful.

S.Moore

richard cole

Tuesday, 21st February 2012 | 04:34 am

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I hope you wrote that on the Valentines card. (or something similar).thumbs up

Amy Barry

Tuesday, 21st February 2012 | 01:29 pm

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Ah...Steve...so so sweet. Love this.

XAmy

Twydell

Wednesday, 22nd February 2012 | 01:59 am

Member | Points: 2067

Hi Stephen, Richard and Amy !!

 

Thank you all for taking the time to read and comment .......

Much appreciated ...

 

Kind regards,

Steve.

MegaStevieR

Sunday, 26th February 2012 | 01:44 pm

Member | Points: 243

A Lovely Poem,

Stevie.

Twydell

Sunday, 26th February 2012 | 02:07 pm

Member | Points: 2067

Hi Stevie !!

 

Thanks a million,

Glad you enjoyed it ....

Regards,

Steve.

lara

Sunday, 29th April 2012 | 11:17 am

Member | Points: 111

Hi Steve,

This is such a lovely poem,with every line it shows the love you have for her.the way you describe her and compare(i dont no another word to describe it) bt how u compare her to the most wonderful things in the world and it to me feels like shes more than them..is wonderful.

Thanks for sharing,

Regards,

Lara

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