A List Of Redemption.

DescriptionA Dark fictional story poem of revenge !!

Posted: 17.02.12  |  Last edited: 17.02.12

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Transfixed by the glare of your terror,

Turned on by the boom of your heart,

I savour your every last second,

As I observe your sad life fall apart.



The stench of the terror from your body,

Fuels my intention to act,

Your pitiful plea’s for forgiveness,

Are in comparison to a drowning black rat.



To think that I actually feared you,

Raises the bones upon my spine,

Now to see you crouching before me,

Gives me a feeling thats so sublime.



Who am I? You ask, well thats just perfect,

Considering the things that you did,

Did you ever think it would haunt you?

Did you think I would just stay as a kid?



We were placed in that home for protection,

From being hurt by the ones that we loved,

But you soon changed our safety perception,

With your foul breath and filthy stained gloves.



Stand up you cowardly scumbag!

Stand up so I can see in your eyes,

Your time for living has ended,

It’s your time to face all your lies.



This steel in my hand, is your salvation,

Way more than you actually deserve,

But to see the pain it’s inflicting,

Is a memory I will surely preserve.



Ah the feel of your flesh as it’s parting,

The warmth of your blood on my hands,

Your shocked gape of realisation,

Are all feelings that you’d understand?



For each plunge of this blade I have reason,

Each puncture it carves has true cause,

Good riddance you grimy old bastard,

Tell the devil there’s no need for applause.



Now who’s next on my list of redemption?

That will feel the wrath of my knife?

I think maybe the deaf and blind master?

Then I’ll move on to his sadistic fat wife.

Comments

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Absolutely Brilliant Steve Thumbs Up ;-D

I loved It

Really Well Done ;-D

hmm.. delicious, sweet revenge.

A bit frightening!

Hi Susanna !!

 

Thank you very much !! 

Glad you enjoyed it ...........

 

Kind regards,

Steve.

Hey Kieran !!

 

Yep ..... Ya can't beat a bit of revenge !!!! glee

 

Thanks for reading and commenting....

 

Regards,

Steve.

Howya John !!

Sorry diddn't mean to frighten you !!!! LOL upside down

 

Hope you enjoyed it aswell ??

Thanks for reading and commenting .......

 

Kind regards,

Steve.

Quite powerful stuff - softened by the ending - with a little twist (? of the knife).

Hi Jeanna !!

 

Thanks a million for reading and leaving your kind comment !!!

Sure there is no point using a knife without a little twist !!! LOL

 

Kind regards,

Steve.

nice really gives a true sense of what hate would look like if it was written

enjoyed this journey down a dark deep place

good write

Hi Anthony !!!

 

Yep Hate can be a very scary monster best kept in its cage me thinks ??

 

Thanks for taking a look and for your comment .....

 

Kind regards,

Steve.

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