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Hurt
Descriptionrecently my uncle got cancer, need to let out how I feel about it.
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I heard the news
Just last week
You were sick
And very week
A tear dropped down,
My face
Down flooded more,
At quick pace
They told me
It was cancer
I'll never forget
Yes,
A very severe case
I put on a brave face
Inside dying,
trying
To think positive
For you raised,
Me up
So i cant
Let you
down.
Comments
Tuesday, 7th February 2012 | 08:38 pm
Tuesday, 7th February 2012 | 11:51 pm
Hi Elaine !!
First I would like to say sorry to hear your Uncle is sick, I wish him well being and comfort !!
and wish you strength and courage !!
This is a warm and compassionate write oozing the love you have for your uncle,
The last six lines are powerful !!
May I suggest you read this to him, if you haven't already??
Thank you for sharing,
Kind regards,
Steve
Wednesday, 8th February 2012 | 10:35 pm
Sorry to hear of your very bad news. Elaine....Poetry is such a great way to let out our feelings, whether they are sad or happy ...I fiond it gives me peace to write out many things that I am feeling, thinking about , etc...And yes, I'm sure he would love to see this..
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Tuesday, 7th February 2012 | 07:58 pm
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