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by Elaine

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Posted: 14.02.12  |  Last edited: 14.02.12

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You dont know 

How i feel for you 

When you leave me short 

I try not let it shine through 

But it doesn't make sence 

You acting this way 

A short reply "k" is all you say 

And it makes me regret 

Falling for you 

Letting you in 

Cause i just got dropped 

And a short reply "k" is all you say

 

I need to see you 

And show you how 

You've turned my world 

Upside down 

You know 

Jealousy is a sin 

I guess you can call me a sinner

Cause those girls couln't get any thinner 

Couldn't get more prettier.

 

 

 

 

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3010sANTHONY

Tuesday, 14th February 2012 | 10:47 am

Member | Points: 1138

this is good thanks for sharing i think snese is spelled with a S at the end but i'm not sure but i like this just the same hope all goes well and hi

Elaine

 

Anthony

susanna Dunne

Wednesday, 15th February 2012 | 02:29 am

Member | Points: 6481

Hi Elaine

Really well written ;-D

Twydell

Wednesday, 15th February 2012 | 08:42 pm

Member | Points: 2067

Hi Elaine !!

sad but clever write, I'm sure many have been in this situation ??

I liked the emphasis on "K" it added to the intensity .......

 

Thanks for sharing,

Kind regards,

Steve.

Kerkedijk

Thursday, 16th February 2012 | 11:02 pm

Member | Points: 5030

Elaine,

I think you have expressed the pain that many of us feel when treated less than we should have been. Writing helps when hurt, good to get it out and voice it. Liked this a lot.thumbs up

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