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by Pat Kelly

DescriptionHappy, happy, happy

Posted: 24.01.12  |  Last edited: 24.01.12

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Tonight I will be happy

spread happines all around

before tomorrow morning

the king of happiness

I'll be crowned.

 

 

Fantastic Pat    now thats what I call poetry

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Pat Kelly

Tuesday, 24th January 2012 | 10:24 pm

Member | Points: 64

D'you know what it is Pat, they are an ungrateful lot on this site. I spent the whole night commenting on their work and they would not even bother to say thanks. your poem is great Pat,

Thanks Pat

Pat Kelly

Tuesday, 24th January 2012 | 10:33 pm

Member | Points: 64

'Night all
'night Pat don't suppose we will see you again.
Not on this site the're too rude.

Tommy Murray

Tuesday, 24th January 2012 | 10:45 pm

Member | Points: 365

Simple and to the point of perfect happiness

Reminds me of Ken Dodd

Twydell

Tuesday, 24th January 2012 | 11:27 pm

Member | Points: 2010

Happy acting the big man and making decent peoples lives a misery !!!

Oh nice poem Pat !!

kindest regards,

Mr Twydell

Kerkedijk

Wednesday, 25th January 2012 | 09:10 am

Member | Points: 4924

Pat,

May you always be happy. thumbs up

Pat Kelly

Wednesday, 25th January 2012 | 11:01 am

Member | Points: 64

Good morning Pat how are you

im grand
see you later
ok

Pat Kelly

Wednesday, 25th January 2012 | 11:14 am

Member | Points: 64

I neednt bother with you i already left a comment here

Bolderdix

Wednesday, 25th January 2012 | 04:12 pm

Member | Points: 43

Kelly,

Have you no one else in your life apart from your sad self.

Just imagine writing on your own site to compliment yerself.

dual personality disorder?

mad B****X.

Oh! I gave you an x.

Bolderdix

Wednesday, 25th January 2012 | 04:13 pm

Member | Points: 43

rock on

There you are head banger!

Pat Kelly

Wednesday, 25th January 2012 | 04:18 pm

Member | Points: 64

if i get me hands on you i.ll kick the bejaysus outa ya and dont think i dont knoe who yar with your wooden westmeath head

mauricebrosnan1

Wednesday, 25th January 2012 | 05:16 pm

Member | Points: 431

You might not like my story, 'my friend'  but at least I put them online for criticism. I never mind criticism, constructive is good but your empty comments say more about you than they do about my work. No reply necessary.

katrinamunn

Wednesday, 25th January 2012 | 07:45 pm

Member | Points: 71

i get it now so sad

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