Groping for the Hour of Freedom

DescriptionDick Greeder wants to know what you think!

Posted: 21.02.12  |  Last edited: 22.02.12

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Groping for the Hour of Freedom

 

I

Dick Greeder got him self locked up for a while

But hell, what’s a wee spell of time

With no file nor bail? More time for eating,

Building up meat and the cut of his gib,

Getting to meet the meat off the street

With their tales of defeat

At the hands of the filth on the beat,

Back in the cage recharging the hate

Loving the highs. Nay for the clock

That’s still late, its rhythm

Out of shape and syncopation

With the erratically curved bio rhythms

Of Dick Greeder, current incarcerate

 

………………….Up and down

Pumping iron; harder going up,

Softer coming down-

Unlike real real life

Which is the other way around..

…………… around and around

The rat run yard

Getting dizzy absorbing the hate

“Call round later?”

“No man! I’ll be off my head”

 

Dick Greeder queues for his bread

While the clock tries to keep up;

Head down avoiding its eye

And some others he’d rather not

Socio-lies with along the social path

 

Tick tock by two- too many

 

II

Big plans are afoot;

Meat up, build up

Wise up, sober up

Cleaned up, feeling strong

Meditating in containment,

Distracted, waiting for the slow gate

Recharge a sense of liberation

 

No! But that never works

Cause Dick Greeder’s cage is the skin

He’s wrapped up in

 

 

He’s not meditating

Merely storm whipping behind those eyes

Dreaming of resetting clocks

A virgin pendulum launched,

Osmotic creep of cog on wheel

Inciting the groping hands

Forever tracking the hour of freedom,

He thinks!

 

In his young sullied mind

Plotting slowly,

Calm in the currency of currently

Which is currently common as time

 

The wisdom of time takes time to descend

 

 

III

Greeder’s segments were chopped up too small

Scattered too wide, like a half woven web

Lacking core strength, like flesh in collision

With cold wielded steel

Driven with malice: intent, satisfaction even.

 

Tick-tock, tick-tock-tock-tick-tick-tock

Goes the leering clock  

For the sullied young mind, storm whipping;

Big plans afoot…by the gate…

The ones he’s never met yet…

Licking his lips,

Meditating-

With malice-intent,

A desire needing t’ be sated…

 

Tick-tock goes the clock

Past the Wisdom of Time

Groping for the hour of Freedom

Cynically indifferent 

Comments

Hi Kieran,

An enjoyable write, indeed...Thank you for sharing.

XAmy

Glad yoy enjoyed Amy and thanks for dropping by. 

Hi Kieran !! 

Not sure who this guy is sorry :-(

 

I enjoyed the read though, loved the flow and storyline !!

thanks for sharing,

 

Regards,

steve.

Hi Kieran

An enjoyable read

well done ;-D

Looks as though you've done a lot of time ... you got the feel just right (and please don't ask me how I know) ...

"... Cause Dick Greeder’s cage is the skin

He’s wrapped up in"

Got what we here in America call goose bumps (goose flesh ...?) when I read those words ... how true of all of us ...

Also as we say here ... the piece is a" home run" ...

Dick Greeder certainly has an interesting life Kieran, liked it, great flow, I felt you were rapping in parts. Lovely work.thumbs up Maire x

Hi Steve, cant say much about who Dick Greeder is but he'll be a greedy dick when he's initally released! Mind he's not groping in a neighbourhood near you (soon). Greeder is a segment of the mind, dormant in some cases but active in all who chase liberation of one sort or another. Thanks kindly for your words, 

Kieran

How is it going Yellowhair? Havent crossed paths (or cyber links) for a while but glad youre still in the land of the living. No I wont ask any blunt questions...I'll just gather the jigsaw pieces until I have picture conceived! yep that line just flew in to my head, preconceived notions of freedom maybe just shackles in the end. Im flattered with your 'home run' compliment, thanks a million, and the fact you got goose bumps...coool.

Hi Kerk M, yea youre right I was in the rap Zone at the start but well...I aint a homie of the NWA. Interesting you should say interesting life. Dick could be a bit of a creep. thanks loads for taking time to read, K. 

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