First Time !!

DescriptionThe clue is in the title !! We've all been through this....... well most of us ;-D Some adult content, not for the easily offended ??

Posted: 18.02.12  |  Last edited: 18.02.12

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I love you, I love you too,

Are you really sure?

Yes I think so, are you?

I guess I am, but not if you’re not,

It’s just I’m nervous my stomachs in knots,

I know mine too! I was up all last night,

I felt kinda dizzy and my head felt light,

Well we can just have a kiss and maybe a hug?

And instead of the bed we can sit on the rug?

I love you, I love you too,

 

That was nice; yeah you really know how to kiss,

It feels pretty good when you hold me like this,

What are you doing? Oh sorry I got carried away,

No, no it’s not a problem, it actually felt okay!

Would you like to put your hand inside my blouse?

I’ll let you know if I get too aroused!

They feel real soft, does this feel good?

Can I take off your top? I don’t know if you should!

Well there is nobody here, but it’s okay if not,

No I’ll take it off, but only because I love you a lot.

 

You can touch them again? Can I give them a kiss?

Oh Em sure I suppose, but can you take off this?

You’ve got a nice body, Oh thanks! So have you,

Before we go any further, are you sure you know what to do?

Further? Ah I mean, yes I know how to do it,

It’s just I don’t want it to hurt? Are you sure it will fit?

Well my brother said that one size fits all,

You’ve been discussing us doing it, With Paul?

Oh no! I overheard him, when he was talking to mates,

If you’re not ready to do this I don’t mind if we wait?

 

Can I, ya know? Feel down below?

Oh god I, I really don’t know?

Its okay, I understand!

No wait, give me your hand!

Careful! Please don’t be so rough,

Okay, okay I think that’s enough?

I’m sorry! Jesus did I do something wrong?

No not really, it’s just I got pinched by my thong!

Maybe we can both take off the rest?

Well I suppose? We’ve gone this far I guess?

 

Oh my god, look at the size of it?

Are you sure it’s going to fit?

I love you, I love you too,

You touch me, while I touch you?

Okay but go real slow,

I’m really turned on and, well, you know?

Oh god, Em I think that’s enough?

Will I put on a Johnny? Are we gunna make love?

Yes! Put it on, and we can give it a go,

But promise me you’ll go real slow?

 

Is that okay? Will I go in some more?

No hold on a second, it feels a bit sore,

Okay, but slowly I’m afraid you won’t fit,

Oh, god, oh no oh shhhhhhit!

What happened, are you okay?

Why are you shaking and cursing that way?

Em, no, I’m sorry, I mean I’m alright,

That’s it; I didn’t mean to give you a fright?

That’s it? You mean you’re all the way in?

Em no! I mean I finished before I got a chance to begin!

Comments

Hi Steve

This is brilliant

The rhyming really flowed well

gave me a giggle too ;-D

Hi Susanna !!

Thanks a million......... 

LOL glad you enjoyed it devil

 

Kindest regards,

Steve.

this was class Steve really had a good laugh i did two different voices to it and read it to the gf we had a great laugh

good write thanks for sharing

Howdy Anthony !!

LOL !! Glad you both liked it !!

 

Thanks for reading it "in two voices" and for leaving your comment,

 

Regards,

Steve.

I'm afraid I feel compelled to say, If this is what passses for poetry then this site does not deserve to be supported.
I can assure you there is nothing personal in this as I do not have a clue as to your identity.
Tony

Hi Tony!

I'm sorry that you didn't approve with this post, in my defence I did say in the description that it's not for the easily offended. To say that this is not poetry I think is a little harsh too, but you are entitled to your opinion and I respect that.
Also I don't hide my identity in fact I'm one of the few on this site that has a picture on my profile. I stand by every thing I write and am not ashamed of any of it.
Thanks for reading and commenting
Kind regards
steve.

Hi Tony!

I'm sorry that you didn't approve with this post, in my defence I did say in the description that it's not for the easily offended. To say that this is not poetry I think is a little harsh too, but you are entitled to your opinion and I respect that.
Also I don't hide my identity in fact I'm one of the few on this site that has a picture on my profile. I stand by every thing I write and am not ashamed of any of it.
Thanks for reading and commenting
Kind regards
steve.

Hi Tony!

I'm sorry that you didn't approve with this post, in my defence I did say in the description that it's not for the easily offended. To say that this is not poetry I think is a little harsh too, but you are entitled to your opinion and I respect that.
Also I don't hide my identity in fact I'm one of the few on this site that has a picture on my profile. I stand by every thing I write and am not ashamed of any of it.
Thanks for reading and commenting
Kind regards
steve.

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