The essence of you.

DescriptionA fictional thought !!

Posted: 11.02.12  |  Last edited: 11.02.12

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I can feel you,

I know your there,

I can sense your presence,

I can smell your scented hair.

 

Retouch my heart,

Let your entrancing bells toll,

Release the amorous butterflies,

Let them free inside my soul.

 

Kiss me again,

With warm lily soft lips,

Melt the loneliness from my passion,

Arouse lost senses with your gentle fingertips.

 

I can see you,

Though not outside my mind,

Reach out, rebuild my vision,

Without you I’ve become so blind.

 

Your shadow is getting stronger,

Your being becoming clouds,

Your beauty used to stun me,

But now it’s become a shroud.

 

Show me your eyes,

Look at me the way you used to,

Your emerald eyes of Ireland,

That drew my love to you.

 

Till death do we part?

Is it ever the end?

I’m so haunted by your beauty,

On your essence I depend.

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Hi Steve

Remarkable and a very" very Lovely Piece

Well Done ;-D

Hi Susanna !!

Thank you very much, glad you enjoyed ...... ;-)

 

Kind regards,

Steve

Steve, this could be a poem about Ireland..or is it a loved one in time for Valentine's Day?

 

Doesn't matter as it could work well both ways..I like this verse...

'Show me your eyes,

Look at me the way you used to,

Your emerald eyes of Ireland,

That drew my love to you.'

 

XX

Hi Barbara !!

 

To be honest I was in a bit of a morbid mood when writing this !! I imagined sitting in an empty room on a single chair being visited by my wife after her passing ??? I know a horrible thought, but I just know I wouldn't be able to let go .............

 

Thanks for sharing your views, I agree and think your look on this write is a much nicer one than mine :-D

 

Again, thank you for reading and commenting,

 

Kindest regards,

Steve.

Poetry is like this isn't it?  We can often find different threads of meaning ...I'll go with the bright side, Steve !!!  XX

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