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The cruel sea.

by robinbanks

DescriptionJust a thought, a tiny one.

Posted: 25.01.12  |  Last edited: 25.01.12

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The sea,

the sea,

the bruising sea

visits Whitegate

and Torquay.

 

Surrounds this island

and the one next door,

bullies the land

when coming ashore.

 

Then again

where would we be

without that ruffian

we call the sea.

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robinbanks

Wednesday, 25th January 2012 | 11:06 pm

Member | Points: 1004

Well don't look at it then.

MuddyWaters

Thursday, 26th January 2012 | 04:10 pm

Member | Points: 104

Ignore Kelly, sir.

The guy's just looking for an audience for his own particular brand of arrogance.

 

Really dug this piece, though.

I reckon you've got the corner on the malevolent nature of the sea, with your use of words like "bruising" and "bullies".

 

Evocative stuff, boss.

 

- Muddy

 

 

robinbanks

Thursday, 26th January 2012 | 04:30 pm

Member | Points: 1004

Thanks Muddy, your a buddy.

Tiny

Thursday, 26th January 2012 | 08:36 pm

Member | Points: 689

Hi Robin

I love the Sea and I love the way you have portrayed it in this wonderful piece.

As for the above silly comments. Ignore. Their depriving some village of its idiot.

well done Robin

Treas x

robinbanks

Thursday, 26th January 2012 | 08:39 pm

Member | Points: 1004

Thank you Tiny for your positive coment.

Twydell

Thursday, 26th January 2012 | 11:14 pm

Member | Points: 2010

Hi Robin !!

This is a great descriptive piece !!! I also love the use of words.......

The ocean is an exciting topic to write about and you have done it justice ....

Much enjoyed, thank you for sharing,

Kind regards,

Steve.

robinbanks

Friday, 27th January 2012 | 12:36 pm

Member | Points: 1004

Thank you Steve for your generous words.

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