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2 Swords

by troyness

Descriptionthis is my first post so hope you enjoy reading fell free to comment..

Posted: 01.10.10  |  Last edited: 02.10.10

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You are my fear

Yet I hold you dear

You haunt my dreams

Yet I sleep near

You take over my thoughts

Yet i'm thinking clear

You overpower my heart

Yet it's beating close

You cut my wrists open

Yet I have no blood to bleed

You stole my soul

Yet i'm fine without it

You killed my shadow

Yet it still follows me

You broke me in pieces

Yet i'm still complete.

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James F Linnane

Saturday, 2nd October 2010 | 12:14 am

Member | Points: 2179

Welcome Troyness a good start,well written ,a couple of minor spelling mistakes,I do it all the time myself.A good poem well done,James.

troyness

Saturday, 2nd October 2010 | 10:51 pm

Member | Points: 110

THANKS FOR THE COMMENT JAMES WILL POST MORE TO READ

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