5 minutes of a morning

Descriptioni awoke one morning moved to the window opened it and started to listen then grabbed my writing pad and this is what i came up with.

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CURTAINS
dog barkng,
pen, board breaking,
page, dog barking,
and then people talking.

Cock crowing
prams
engine starting
gate opening
gate closing
cock crowing
chainsaw going
not a chainsaw, a strimmer
(hand held lawnmower thing)
bird whistling, children playing,
dog barking, cars passing,
breeze blowing, paperbeing rolled over,
bird singing, dog barking,
van leaving, no! van arriving,
strimmer, door,dog,child,people,dog,birds,
sky,crow,trees,light,
CURTAINS.

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Hi 3010sANTHONY

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I really, really enjoyed this! Brilliant!

Great stuff! smile

Thank you all. You don't know how much that means to me. blush

You wrote a really great piece here, Anthony - the wonderful mundane sounds of the morning - telling that the world is starting up another day. I rolled along with the piece.  Well done to you - Liz

thanks for looking at this piece liz truly thank youlove

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