All the words I use in my stories can be found in the dictionary - it's just a matter of arranging them into the right sentences.
To Catch A Killer
DescriptionScene 1
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Fade into a cold day. Two men sit on a bench, wrapped up to hide from the cold air. A noisy day in the centre of the town occurs. Cars and trucks drive by. A random or two stroll past the two men.
Det. Tony:
Do you understand?
Det. Mike:
What am I, an idiot?
Det. Tony:
I wonder sometimes.
Det. Mike:
Hi now, that is not nice.
Det. Tony:
Nice? You talk about nice. It is a cold blooded world we live in and you talk about being nice? Please god shut the hell up
Det. Mike:
Oh, says the guy that just killed someone.
Det. Tony:
I did it for a reason.
Det. Mike
Which was?
Det. Tony
He was a cold blooded killer. He raped and slaughtered three women. You cannot just leave a guy like that roam the streets with freedom. What if one of them was your wife? Would you sick? Would you kill?
Det. Mike
I would have kill him faster than he can get his trousers off
Det. Tony takes a sip of coffee, trying to garner some warmth. Children run around in the park across the street from the two men. A woman, half dressed with a mini-skirt, winks at Det. Tony. She carries on walking, showing her vacant beautiful legs.
Det. Mike
[Giggles]
Nice legs on that
Det. Tony
I got a wife. A beautiful one in fact!
Det. Mike
Don’t mean we got to do anything huh?
Det. Mike shout’s at the girl, catching her attention. She turns around and wink’s again.
Det. Mike
Are you going to come back?
The woman turns around.
Woman:
Nope. I got to be somewhere.
Det. Mike:
Tease.
The woman carries on walking down the street. She is out of sight from the two detectives. She get’s dragged into a dark alley by an unknown man. He is hitting her off the wall. She pleaded for help, but nobody can hear her. The man slits her throat, then her drops to the cold ground. He looks around, then at the girl, and around again. The man flees the scene into the main street, leaving the girl to rot behind.
Det. Mike
She was a nice looking girl.
Det. Tony
Yes, a little too nice.
Let’s go
Det. Mike
Where?
Det. Tony
Somewhere fucking warm!
Comments
Hi Stevie
A great peace of Drama here ;-D
Would you mind If I mentioned a few typho's?
He is hitting her off the wall.
Stevie this is only a suggestion
Would throat sound more shocking than neck?
Ps,
I don't mean to offend you in any way
If I did.
I sincerly apologise ok ;=D
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